Wednesday, 23 December 2015

Day 3 of filming

Day 3 of filming

Location: The couple’s house


What went well:
- All members of the group that were needed turned up and arrived on time
- Both characters being filmed wore the same as previous filming days which allowed there to be no continuity errors
- We were able to get all the shots we planned to get and try out some new ones that would work well
- Ideas were able to be shared by the whole group and we all cooperated and worked well together

Issues we had:
- There was a big problem with lighting. We are unaware whether that’s because the camera we used didn’t have a protector for the lenses or whether it was just because on the day of filming it was light outside. To solve this problem, two members of the group had to hold a dark bed sheet over the windows (shown in the picture). This helped for the majority of the shot, the laptop screen still can’t be seen clearly but we didn’t think that was much of an issue.
- The house we filmed in was on a busy main road so when we filmed the scene of the sister knocking at the door we didn’t think the dialogue would be loud enough if it was said outside the door, so instead we changed it so the sister comes in, speaks then leaves.
- One of the scenes we’d planned to film was the poster being printed, when we tried to film this it didn’t work because the printer didn’t have enough ink in it. To solve this we filmed him pressing print but didn’t film it printing, we just filmed the end result which had been printed already

Saturday, 19 December 2015

Second rough cut

Second Rough Cut



Here's our rough cut of the two scenes we've filmed so far.

Monday, 14 December 2015

The wife: costume, hair and makeup

The wife: costume, hair and makeup


For the wife we wanted her costume to reflect her characteristics. We decided on a low cut top and a tight skirt to portray her promiscuous side. We chose the colours red and white as the red is associated with love and lust but also danger and blood and the white is to show her innocent side as up to cheating she hasn't ever been unfaithful before that. We decided to have her bare foot as it gives a sense of vulnerability and also that she was at home before he captured her. We wanted the outfit to be slightly dirty so used mud and makeup to make sure it didn't look new, this is because the husband would have dragged her from the house to the cellar and we wanted to make that clear. The length of the skirt worked well as on the day of filming the actress that played the wife had a big bruise on her thigh and we were able to show that in the opening sequence to hint at the abuse she went through prior to being trapped in the cellar.

We wanted her hair to be messy to show the state she's been in and again this would have got messed up when being dragged to the cellar, to achieve this we back combed her hair to make it messy. We made sure it wasn't perfect by messing it up even more when filming and making sure bits of hair were in front of her face as her hands are tied up therefore she wouldn't be able to move them out of her face.

As well as the hair we also wanted her makeup to be a mess, We decided to smudge her mascara to show she's been crying in the cellar, the darkness of her eyes also portray the bad she's done to result her being trapped in the cellar. We wanted a red lipstick to match her top in showing her promiscuity, we also smudged this to make it look like she's been thrown around but the husband and this could also have happened by him covering her mouth to make sure no one heard her screaming when he dragged her down or when he tied the cloth around her mouth.


Saturday, 12 December 2015

Day 2 of filming

Day 2 of filming

Location: The cellar

What went well:
- For this location all members of the group were needed and all of them turned up on time and since Robbie had been in a scene that we’ve filmed previously it was important for him to be in the same outfit and look the same as he did and he did.
- We were able to get all shots we planned to get and we needed and also got some extra shots that we hadn’t planned but thought would work well.
- The group as a whole cooperated well and were able to all share their opinions and we filmed a range of different things that different people thought would work so we’re able to see which works the best when editing.
- We used two different types of cameras to get some different shots so additionally to our camera we will use throughout the opening we also had a GoPro to use to strap to the wife's head to allow a point of view shot.

Issues we had:
- Leading up to the day we didn’t plan what each person needed to bring on the day therefore on the day of filming we had to quickly go to the shops to buy the majority of props including the tape, cloth and an outfit for Freya as although she didn’t forget she didn’t want the clothes she bought to be so ruined that she couldn’t wear them again. We also had to buy a ready meal as we didn’t realise it would be seen in the shot. Although this didn’t affect our filming a lot since we still got everything done, it was something we could have done earlier to save us doing it then and something we know to do in the future.
- There were some issues with the lighting in the cellar as the room we chose to film in had a main light but it was too bright for the atmosphere we wanted, we tried various different torches that we found in the cellar but none of them were the brightness we wanted so instead we took a light from one of the other rooms in the cellar and had to make sure that whoever held it wasn’t in shot and put it on the floor in one of the shots as we couldn’t find a way for the holder of it to not be seen. We also had to make sure it was in a place that didn’t cause shadows for the tripod and the person filming.
- In this scene there is one line of dialogue, we found this tricky as we wasn’t sure first of all whether to just have the sound or whether we should actually film his face saying it. We also didn’t want it to sound too aggressive and didn’t want him being jokey so it took a lot of takes to get it perfect. We know for next time to make sure whoever’s saying the dialogue needs a bit of practice to make sure he/she knows what to say and how to say it.
- The floor of the cellar was very uneven and rocky therefore standing the tripod up and making sure it was level was tricky, we had to make the legs uneven in order to even the camera out. We managed to do this in the end. It also made it a little bit dangerous for the actor of the wife (Freya) as it would have injured her feet if she walked across as she didn’t have shoes or socks on.


Thursday, 10 December 2015

First rough cut

First rough cut


This is the first scene we filmed and edited. Although we filmed it first this scene comes second in our opening as a whole.
In this version we've muted all sounds, this is because the ambient sound in the location was too loud on the camera as it was on a windy day. Also, on the day we edited this scene we hadn't decided what music we'd want in this scene yet.

Wednesday, 9 December 2015

Day 1 of filming

Day 1 of filming
Location: The Street


What went well:
- All members turned up to the location on time in the correct outfit for their character.
- The main camera we needed to film most of the shots in the scene was charged up and worked well.
- We were able to get a range of useful shots, some that were planned, some that we thought of whilst we were at the location.

Issues we had:
- We were unable to film some shots at some angles because the sun was so bright it blocked some of the shots therefore we had to move until it didn’t block it anymore.
- For this scene we had planned to use two different cameras, the main one and a member of our groups however when we got to the location and tried to film on the one that belonged to the member of our group’s camera wasn’t working properly. It allowed us to film on it but then didn’t save properly and wouldn’t show up on the camera’s SD card. The owner (Jack) tried to fix it but wasn’t able to find out what was wrong with it. So we weren’t able to use that one and just stuck to using the main one which wasn’t too bad as we still got everything we needed without too much trouble.
- As we were filming in a public place we were prepared that members of the public would need to use the walk way and we would have to stop to let them. So we had to stop filming a couple of times so we didn't accidentally film any members of the public




Preliminary task evaluation

Preliminary Task Evaluation

How filming went:
Overall the filming wasn't too difficult, for the first official scene we filmed as a group we managed to work well together in what's best for us to do. We'd previously learnt about the 180 degree rule so we were able to put that into practise as that was part of the checklist for the task. The equipment we used work effectively however we had trouble with the tripod as we didn't realise it didn't rotate the whole way round, this was a problem that was easily sorted but moving the props closer together to get it all in shot. We also made sure there were no continuity errors by checking everything was in the same place before filming each little clip.

How editing went:
As well as the filming this was the first proper scene we were able to edit as a group. Some of my group have more experience with the program we used than me so it was a good chance to find out who would be best at taking more control over the editing, however we were all able to share our thoughts and opinions throughout. As there were no necessary effects or transitions needed we just practiced putting clips on and cropping them which weren't too hard at all.  We soon got the hang of it and we now know what to do when it come to our real opening. We used shot reverse shot effectively in our preliminary task when each character was talking and action match editing to make sure everything matched correctly.

Problems we encountered:
- issues with the tripod not rotating enough
- trouble with clips deleting whilst editing and having to reattach the camera in order to get them back

Strength of the prelim:
- we included everything we needed to effectively
- we were able to learn what's needed in filming eg sticking to the 180 degree rule
- we were able to practice using Final Cut Express

What we will do the same next time:
- never break the 180 degree rule
- making sure everything necessary is in shot
- no continuity errors
- action match editing

What we will do differently next time:
- Keep saving our work to make sure nothing gets lost

Preliminary filming task

Preliminary Filming Task


We have included:
- A character walking, opening a door, crossing a room and sitting down in a chair
- A conversation where both characters speak
- Correct use of 180 degree rule
- Shot/ reverse shot editing
- Action match editing
- No continuity errors

Tuesday, 8 December 2015

Filming practice

Filming Practice


Here is a short video of some different practice shots we got on the first day of using the camera equipment, we tried out shots like panning and saw how easy they were with the tripod. We also wanted to see the quality of the camera by trying zooming in and out and seeing how clear it was. As seen in the bird scene the zoom in on the camera was good quality so we now know if we want to use that in our opening the camera can handle the zoom. 

This was also our first time using Final Cut Express and although there were some issues with the clips disappearing for our first time it didn't go too bad for our first time. And although we didn't save them to this video we were able to try out effects which unfortunately didn't work but when we work on our real opening we will try and figure out how we can use them if we want to.

Questionnaire results: evaluation

Questionnaire results: evaluation

Our questionnaire allowed us to get audience feedback on the idea of our film and characters before we filmed, so we could change or adapt any ideas we had to make sure we did what people would want to see.
The first helpful finding we got was that the younger people we asked said they were more likely to watch or film than the older ones. People around the age of 11-18 mainly choose the likelihood of 4 or 5 whereas people over 31 years said around 3. This gives us a better understanding at the target audience we'd aim our film at so if we were to create the whole film we'd perhaps adapt it so there's maybe not as much swearing or violence as we would have if the target audience was older.
The next questions that were useful were the ones about outfit ideas. For the husband to show his psychopathic side whilst also keeping him looking quite normal and day-to-day looking the audience choose all black (black t-shirt, black jeans, black shoes) Therefore we've decided this will work best for the character of the husband. The audience said that to show the wife looking promiscuous but also the protagonist of the story we should put her in a Red top with no sleeves and a shirt white pencil skirt, we agree with this as the red of the top will bring out her promiscuous side and the white of the skirt will show the innocence she has in the film.
We had previously struggled in naming our film so was sure to include this as one of the questions and 'The Vault' seemed to be quite popular with the audience however it only won by 5, 'Deception' getting 3 so we are yet to discuss this however we agree with the over all feedback on this question and agree with the two that got the most votes.
People we asked voted for around the same aged target audience as the rating 15 got the most votes and so did aiming the film at 16-20 year olds, as i said previously this just repeats the discussion already made about the target audience for the film so we are certain to agree with this.
We got a few added comments for the last question about things to improve, these include 'don't give too much away in the opening', 'make sure she looks realistic eg smudge the wife's makeup', 'don't clean the cellar before filming', 'make sure the actors are enthusiastic' and 'use dark lighting in the cellar' we thought these were all good points and suggestions and we will be sure to take them into consideration and make sure we do them.

Questionnaire results: data presentation

Questionnaire results: data presentation

Which costume do you feel would look more psychopathic for the male character (husband)?

Which costume do you feel represents the female character (wife) as promiscuous but also innocent the most?


Which main title do you feel fits best according to the plot of the story?


Questionnaire Results

Questionnaire Results

1.) Gender







2.) Which age bracket do you fall into? (how old are you)










3.) Relationship status?








4.) What socio-economic group would you consider yourself?












5.) Our opening sequence plot: a young couple are married and live together. The woman is a personal assistant and the man is a successful businessman, and that is how they met. However, the woman has cheated on her husband with her new boss and the husband has found out. He is keeping her hostage in their cellar underground, but the rest of society believe she is just gone missing and the man is pretending to not know where she is.
From a scale of 0-5 (o being never and 5 being 100%), what is the likelihood of you wanting to watch this film?












6.) Which costume do you feel would look more psychopathic for the male character (husband)?














7.) Which costume do you feel represents the female character (wife) as promiscuous the most?











8.) Which main title do you feel fits best according to the plot of the story?















9.) What general certificate should our film be? (Age restriction)











10.) Roughly around what age range should our target audience be?









11.) What you feel there is anything we could do to improve our idea for better locations, further elements to add the plot etc.)
- Don’t give too much away in the opening
- Make sure she looks realistic eg makeup smudged
- Don’t clean the cellar before filming in it
- Enthusiastic actors

Sunday, 6 December 2015

Prop: Newspaper

Newspaper

This is the newspaper seen in the opening sequence showing the article of Megan’s disappearance, the title is simple as both the characters and audience are unaware of what’s happened to her so we wouldn’t be able to give too much detail about how or why she’s missing. The only detail shown is that she’s been missing for 3 days and that she was last seen coming home from work. The use of the adjective ‘concerned’ before Abigail but having no adjective before James’ name subtly hints that something isn’t quite right and that perhaps he isn’t as concerned about his wife as he should be. The quotation “I just want her back safely” has a slight aggressive tone about it hinting at James’ character and is also quite cold considering this man is suppose to be in love with her. And ending with ‘after sister contacted us yesterday” clearly shows it wasn’t the husbands choice to involve the media and we can presume he wasn’t too happy about it as this is attracting more people to the situation creating a greater chance in him being caught.



Prop: Missing poster

Missing Poster


Here is the missing persons poster that James makes in the opening sequence, this is a vital prop used throughout the opening as there are scenes of the sister and husband putting it up in order to find Megan. We chose to have the husband make it as it shows him to be concerned for the wife’s safety, therefore tricking the audience into thinking he has nothing to do with her being missing. We chose this picture of Megan as we feel it shows the side of their relationship that is quite possessive and shows her as a submissive character, this is by him having his arm around her almost hinting that she is under his control which is a key theme throughout the film. 

Planned as a group but written by Jessica Granger

Thursday, 3 December 2015

Engaging the audience

Engaging the Audience

Camera shots

   Canted shots: This will be use to make the shot look uneven and disorientated the audience. It'll also connote the feelings of the wife, to show fear, confusion, anxiety and panic.
   The camera will always be to one side of the husband. The shot will never 100% show the husband face, and will constantly partially show parts of his face. This will create a mysterious, unclear character, making the the husband enigmatic. This links to Roland Barthes' theory, high states that all good narratives have enigma codes, which leaves the audience wanting to continue to watch so everything can be resolved.
  Extreme close up shots: extreme close up shots will be used on the husband so that you can never see his face clearly. This will contribute to the enigmatic character that is being created. Extreme close up shots will use on the wife to emphasis emotions and feelings. This will create suspense within the audience and will build tension.
All these camera shots will be used to disorientated the audience as much as possible. The camera shots will not reveal anything completely so that the audience will want to continue to watch so that they can find out what is going.

Sound/Dialogue/ music
   Eery non-diegetic asynchronous sound that does not match with the visual content. This will be used to signify that there is something that the audiences are unaware of. The asynchronous music will also be used to disorientated the audience and confuse them, which will reflect the way the wife is feeling.
   The tempo of the music will increase dramatically when the husband begins to walk down the stares. This will be done to build up tension with in the audience, and represents the husband as an antagonistic character.
   The dialogue will be soft and quiet. The character will not speak loudly during the opening sequence to signify that there is a secret that is to be told and that someone is hiding something.
   The dialogue will be minimal between the wife, husband and wife's sister in the beginning to connote tension between the character, and to show that the wife's sister may know that something is going. The minimal dialogue will also contribute to setting the scene and atmosphere of the opening scene.
   A dramatic contrast between gloomy slow paced music at the start, compared to the faster paced music to signify danger.
All of these sound techniques will be used to represent to the audience that someone is being deceptive and that there is some thing to be revealed. This will make the ash wince continue to watch so they can discover this revelation.

Editing transitions.
   Quick transitions from one scene to another. Scenes will end prematurely and will cut to other locations quickly. This will be done so that the audience he find it hard to follow what is going on and will not be able keep up with the storyline.
   However, in contrast, there will be smooth transitions from one scene to another juxtaposition to the quick transitions used. This will be sued to confuse the audience and it'll make the mood of the opening sequence unclear.
   Every piece of visual content, there will be a filter that will represent the scene as mysterious and enigmatic. This will be done so that whole entire mood of the opening sequence is represented in the same when and that there is something unclear throughout.
All these siting techniques will be used to create a quick, paced dramatic opening sequence, without bombarding the audience will too many action codes. It'll be fast paced and unclear so that the audience find it hard to follow, consequently encouraging them to continue watching.

Colours
   A lot of black costumes and coloured objects to connote darkness. The husband will be in a black consume to represent him as the clear antagonist,mysterious, deceptive and ambiguous. Overall represent him as the clear villain in the opening sequence.
   The wife will be if a red top and a white dress. The use of red will be done to connote love (love for either her husband or the man she has cheated with). However the red will also connote danger to audience, signifying that she is not the innocent character in this film and that she is untrustworthy.
Overall, the colours will represent the characters in a fairly obvious way, however will engage the audience and make them question why they're being represented in this way.

Locations
   The wife's sister and the husband will be seen hanging "missing" posters around the area in fairly obviously and common locations, which intrigues the audience due to the fact that there are so many locations, that it makes them curious as to which location is the main location.
   The cellar is the most prominent location in the whole film, and the scene will end there. The opening will end there, along with the revelation that the wife is there. This will engage the audience because it'll make them want to continue watching the film, to find out why the wife is tied in the cellar.
The use of various locations in the opening sequence will add to the confusion of the scene, and will make the audience wonder where she is. Due to the fact that so many common locations are used, it creates further ambiguity as to where she is, and builds tension.

Lighting
   To add to the enigmatic character of the husband, very little/ dark lighting will be used so that his face is not revealed. This will add to the enigma codes of the husband because it won't allow the audience to see his face clearly, making him even more mysterious.
   Harsh lighting as the door in the cellar is opened to emphasis the duration the wife has been down in the cellar. This will give the audience the idea that the husband has known how long she has been down in the cellar.
Generally low lighting to emphasis the darkness and gloominess of the film, and to create enigmatic characters, intriguing the audience to continue to watch the film so that situations are resolved.


Planned as a group but written by Jack Baffour

Wednesday, 2 December 2015

Contingency plan

Contingency plan



Planned as a group but written by Jack Baffour

Tuesday, 1 December 2015

Opening sequence questionnaire

Opening sequence questionnaire

1.) Gender
o   Male
o   Female
o   Other


2.) Which age bracket do you fall into? (how old are you)
o   0-10 years old
o   11-18 years old
o   19-25 years old
o   26-30 years old
o   31+

3.) Relationship status?
o   Single
o   Married
o   In a relationship

4.) What socio-economic group would you consider yourself?
o   A: managerial jobs with high earning salaries
o   B: middle managerial with a good salary
o   C1: Junior managerial roles with an average salary
o   C2: Skilled manual worker
o   D: semi-skilled manual workers
o   E: pensioner, student or unemployed 

5.) Our opening sequence plot: a young couple are married and live together. The woman is a personal assistant and the man is a successful businessman, and that is how they met. However, the woman has cheated on her husband with her new boss and the husband has found out. He is keeping her hostage in their cellar underground, but the rest of society believe she is just gone missing and the man is pretending to not know where she is.
From a scale of 0-5 (o being never and 5 being 100%), what is the likelihood of you wanting to watch this film?
o   0
o   1
o   2
o   3
o   4
o   5



6.) Which costume do you feel would look more psychopathic for the male character (husband)?
o   All black (black t-shirt, black jeans, black shoes)
o   Navy blue t-shirt, black jeans ad black shoes and a navy blue baseball hat on
o   Black hoodie, with blue jeans and a any coloured shoes.
o   Biker outfit (leather jacket, black jeans, black boots)


7.) Which costume do you feel represents the female character (wife) as promiscuous the most?
o   Red top with no sleeves and a shirt white pencil skirt
o   All black (a black tight top and a black pencil skirt)
o   A red short dress (tight)


8.) Which main title do you feel fits best according to the plot of the story?
o   Twisted
o   Missing
o   Deception
o   The Cellar
o   The Vault
o   Down below
o   Unforgiving

9.) What general certificate should our film be? (Age restriction)
o   PG
o   U
o   12
o   15
o   18


10.) Roughly around what age range should our target audience be?
o   5-10 year olds
o   11-15 year olds
o   16-20 year olds
o   21-25 years olds
o   26+


11.) What you feel there is anything we could do to improve our idea for better locations, further elements to add the plot etc.)

Planned as a group but written by Jack Baffour